All Comments on 'An Exchange'

The girl got rid of the dead weight around her neck and now she can fly.

You took what could have been a typical 'sell gf' into a very powerful story. She found her strength at her lowest point. Excellent, well done. 5+

A very well written and heartfelt story

I love what you did here. You took a well-worn cliche, flipped the motivation, and turned it into a brilliant revenge story. For a while I was questioning whether it even belonged in Noncon, but after further consideration I agree wholeheartedly. I love this type of Noncon story, where the sex is transactional rather than compelled by violence. It's easy to write about a brute of a man overpowering a smaller woman. It takes much more imagination and skill to convincingly portray a woman submitting to humiliating sex to get--or in this case, maintain--something that is more important than dignity. Very well done.

Woman up ! I've noticed that when push past her boundaries a woman will take me farther than I am able, by myself . Oh women don't overthink it, you did realise half of this story are her thoughts ! Very delicious thoughts. It has been my pleasure that you shared them with me. I'm curious of this writers gender, I'm hope she knows what she's wrighting.

Interesting story telling.

Absolutely brilliant demonstration of getting inside someone's head to overcome not only the worthless excuse for a boyfriend but also to use those who felt themselves superior and wanted not only sexual satisfaction, they had to try to humiliate her also.

5+