All Comments on 'An Eye for an Eye'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh, well done!

Nicely conceived, excellently written, and a beautiful use of building and releasing tension (both dramatic and otherwise!) throughout. Hot, hot, hot!

norcal62norcal62almost 13 years ago
Wow, for an erotic story the author is repressed.

What is wrong with the words, penis, cock, dick, rod, instead of member? It sounds as if human anatomy is something one can't name. Deadened the action with the stuffy cultural language. Story line was interesting though.

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