All Comments on 'An Innocent Proposal'

by IcePrincess007

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where is the story?

This seemed more like an opening paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A good start

Looking forward to seeing more of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story has potential but is somewhat fast. Also, I don't understand what Judy's looks contribute to the story. Maybe her info is of better use in part 2.

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