by onceamarinedjr
But not great. It would have been but for the very abrupt ending, rushed. Pity.
Loved the premise of the story. The sex was hot and very erotic. Great ending when she gave herself to him one last time on her wedding day!
Really good writing,
You write sex scenes amazingly hot!
Vasectomy's aren't sexy though...
I wish mom found and we witnessed how that went
I prefer stories where dad and daughter end up together (I'm here for the fantasy not the real life consequences)