All Comments on 'An Insistent Daughter'

by onceamarinedjr

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good

But not great. It would have been but for the very abrupt ending, rushed. Pity.

linnearlinnearover 5 years ago
Nice

Nice story and very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

Loved the premise of the story. The sex was hot and very erotic. Great ending when she gave herself to him one last time on her wedding day!

Dmjewels69Dmjewels69over 1 year ago

Really good writing,

You write sex scenes amazingly hot!

Vasectomy's aren't sexy though...

I wish mom found and we witnessed how that went

I prefer stories where dad and daughter end up together (I'm here for the fantasy not the real life consequences)

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