by BDShire
As much as i enjoyed the story i mostly enjoyed the writing style.
Its really good, no silly words or expressions. One of the best erotica iv'e got to read :)
Hot as hell, and proving that erotica can be arousing without needing to be....'slutty'. One of the best stories I've read here. Keep 'up' the good work!!
This is so well written it feels like I'm living it! You've got to write more, please!