by deference
Nice deception in the story line. "First, a bit about me. I'm a Mistress Kim, a Domme in Sarasota." A complete fabrication of the truth. :-( I stopped reading after the second paragraph when I realized this was from a male perspective. I'm NOT even going to rate it.
"To a willing person, injury is not done", this was already known by the Romans so Anonymous is not right.
Although it could have used some editing, the story worked - plausible, absorbing, erotic. As the writer of Ten Thousand, etc., I' gotten this guy's (?) name and followed to this story. I don't regret having done so, and I understand, after a glimpse into his soul, why he liked my story; or, more importantly, was able to understand mine.
in this story line .
Agony and pain never become a pleasure - to the one on the receiving end .
I know its a story, and I know that you can find very hardcore bdsm porn online, which perhaps one could argue isnt real bdsm, But Ive read a bit on bdsm, and no pro dom would beat anyone to a pulp like this. Perhaps an ignorant amatuer might, but this guy is prbably ready for an emergency toom visit, despite his "bliss". A pro dom wouls ask about limits. If someone replies "I have no limits", they would either reject them as a client or impose limits.