All Comments on 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW. What a great story

Veru hot. Please continue

Ducky7Ducky7over 11 years ago
whipped

She will get what ever she wants, any size shape or color. This plot is very over used.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ho hum

Recycled plot and characters. Garbage story. Might have been ok if hubby had her ass first. Now she's a worthless whore like the author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
"Great Story?" Bullshit

Yeah, typical overused wimp cluck husband plot

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
"Great Story?" Absolutely

Yeah, typical under used strong husband plot

reddogs88reddogs88over 11 years ago
Loved it!

It was a hot story that can go further into more chapters. The husband was not a wimp and the wife loves having him and is discovering new sexual fun. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love it

Only for cuckboy and a sex predator friend-c'mon get a life and for the slut wife try a bukakke in public.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
redcucks88 and headcuck35

this is one of your favorite stories, what a couple of cucks. Don't forget to suck the bulls balls you turd sniffers.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Too many 'whys!'

After a year of awkwardness and adjustment, the couple invite him for supper. We later are told 'why', but we don't know 'why' the Bull would accept what he had every reason to expect would be painful and frustrating! Hubby and Sweetie's explanation of his nomination to Bull service was very weak. Why were there not a dozen or more condoms available in the bedroom? And why was the 'no cum in cunt' rule not enforced after the shower?

There was essentially NO seduction of the poor (?) Bull, except for the dress code! In the bedroom, they got down to the nitty-gritty way faster than I would expect after a year of little communication!

Overall, I think this is a fair stroker, but sucked at describing the establishment of a new triad relationship between people with three distinct dyadic histories.

3*

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice story.

Glad it's not a wimp cuck story.. But now where does it go? How does the relationship evolve? Polyamory or does she leave hubby for the third wheel? Does an other woman enter the scene?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

The WACC sat there spanked off and got sloppy seconds. Yeah great marriage they have there. A WACC and a whore. I wonder what the bitch and the cuck do for an encore? DO NOT continue this bullshit. Sharing is one thing being a WACC after a year of marriage is something else. The wife will never again be just the hubby's whore she will be anyone's that catches her eye.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 11 years ago
This is a woman's fantasy written by someone who wishes they could satisfy the...

...longings of two men in their life, maybe they broke a heart but this dpp shit gotta go to gay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Still a cuck story.

1*

DWornockDWornockover 11 years ago
!*

As soon as it was anal, I stopped reading

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AND ANOTHER NEW HAPPY RELATIONSHIPS BEGIN

I guess another 1st time again applies here, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Tell all the haters to f**k off!

It was an offer I certainly wouldn't/couldn't/shouldn't refuse! Great story, and I enjoyed the interpersonal bits (which could have been expanded on, actually.) But a hot read and an orgasm later, I commend you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
oh definately continue!

That was an unbelievably hot story, and I believe well written as well. Don't listen to all the negative people who don't like the content, they just shouldn't read

wherethewindwherethewindover 9 years ago
Awesome!

Great story! A scenario I'd love to encounter sometime.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
should of?

Not bad, but damn, whenever I see "could of", "would of", "should of" in a story it completely ruins it for me.

IvarHakuseIvarHakuseabout 6 years ago
Great read but...

Great story but needed a bit more description of how and what their cocks felt rubbing against each other.

Helen1899Helen18992 months ago

fuck the moaners it was a 5*story and I brought myself off after reading it. Thank you

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