All Comments on 'An Uneven Romance'

How hot is that?! Mmm

Epically stupid and epically bad.

A bit breif and lacking some detail but nice stroke material. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Please keep up the effort.

seems to be a whole lot missing, as to what the people thought. based on what was written, it seems a bit of a jump, into things that is. there is lots of room for development, in a variety of ways. good luck with the story.