All Comments on 'An Unexpected Appointment'

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hotladyvanessahotladyvanessaalmost 9 years ago
Nice work!

I enjoyed the storyline as it has great potential for growth. It was, however,unnecessary, to include that the husband was dominant while depicting the wife as clearly in control. While the original intention may have been for the male to Dom, he did not display necessary dominant characteristics in the story. She obviously controlled the entire scenario despite his specific instructions. <-----Opposite of dominating. Still, very hot MFF!

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