All Comments on 'An Unexpected Journey Ch. 04'

You are a brilliant writer! Loving the way this story is unfolding. Can't wait for the next chapter

i am enjoying how this story is unfolding and cannot wait to see what special celebration is in store for them. thank you for sharing and i do hope to read more soon.

Wow, what a wonderful chapter. Such a work of art i think. You definately pull a person into the story and make the wants and desires felt. Excellent chapter for their journey.