All Comments on 'An Unexpected Visitor'

An excellent read.

Lovely start to 2014.

Good read.

Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us, you really get the May Dec erotic in your plot, good length too. Well done, please keep going.

Great story telling

To Anonymous..

Thank you for the narrative..Although your story line may be a nice way to spend a snowy afternoon, the actual events were as told to you. There is a sequel on it's way.

Layla, the name is of African Decent, it means "Dark Beauty of the Night".

How old is Layla?

A beautiful vivacious 50 something, and we all know that 50 is the new 30...

"Age is a matter of mind, if one doesn't mind, it truly doesn't matter".

Huggs to all my dirty old men...*

Although nicely kissed with your romantic predilection your skillful pen stays faithful to the erotic theme of this forum and delivers a cock rousing tale full of warm pleasure. Being 72 m'self I am powerfully drawn to the mature genre; always on the lookout for quality writing and you deliver with fun and fascinating credibility. I am delighted to discover you and to thank you. Kal

Indeed your hug is well accepted by this dirty old man from a far away land called India!!! The narrative was excellent especially the conversational pieces whilst the absolute raw passion happens. Wonderfully written and eagerly awaiting the sequel. Love canineteeth

You have outdone yourself I love it. I love fucking old men I wish I had more, please write more.

As I am a couple of months away from being a septigenarian I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

It started of nice and slow with both perticipants exchanging life stories and then moving to more sensual matters. Young ladies can learn so much from older men, as young men can do likewise from older women.

I certainly hope that Layla and Fred are the subject of further experiences.

Please keep up your excellent writing.

Best wishes for a Happy New Year.

A really erotic story which was very well written.

Ever since the time as a 20-year when I fucked a 73-year-old woman, I have been very aroused by old/young sexual liaisons. Having read your story, I do so fancy licking and fucking a younger woman.

I enjoyed this well written and erotic story. You get better and better.

Well told, and what detail. Made me very hot. Nice to think that there are older men out there. What a dream to engage in.. Thank you

I enjoy your writing. You come across as very appealing - truly a lovely, fair lady!

Amazingly erotic....love older men and this story

I've always loved older men. Most of the younger men I have slept with have had to be told to play with my clit. Not so the older man. My latest lover was 82 and he told me he couldn't get hard anymore. I got into a 69 and lowered my pussy over his face while I sucked his cock. That old cock was soon hard and throbbing and I rode him till we both orgasmed. A gnarled old cock and wrinkled balls ever time for me.

Excellent writing even if I am only 66. I am hoping that there is more.

What a well-crafted and delicious story this is. It is also quite believable. Two older people coming upon each other In a snowstorm. I really like the added touch of them cooking chili together before they fucked and then eating it afterwards. What a very nice touch. I make a pretty mean chili myself and would love to share it With a sexy mature woman. And then I would love to drill her with my 70+-year-old cock. The cock which I stroked willets reading the story. This is not the first of your stories which I have read, but the first one that I have commented on. I love your well-crafted stories. Dan

I LOVE stories from this author. The kind of old men she describes are the ones I want to be with! Horny, sexy, naughty. . Mmmmmmm I would love to be their fuck toy.

Dan you sound horny. . .pity you don't have a contact.