by OutlawedSubversion
Good premise.
But rushed. And too automatic.
Needed more preliminaries to have her ivercome her trepidation.
Needed more dialog about what he was going to do to her ass. Then dialog while he was doing it.
And she needed to say something other than "Fuck".
Three stars.
OMG Hottest story I have read on here yet! Want to get fucked like this.
What a spectacularly written story! Absolutely among the very best on Literotica. A magical tale of what anal pleasure can be.
Scuse me.. just got to take a minute to resume normal breathing !!
With the right preparation, anal sex gives me better orgasms and always makes my pussy squirt. I can actually feel the cum when it erupts fron my partners penis.
A great account and one that ill be trying with m,y wife as she feels the same, well read this together and enjoy the outcome - thank you for a great story!
Great story; wish I could have had Violet's experience! Learned to love anal after a bad first experience, but this story is better than my training. With some additional editing this would be a 5-star read.
A perfect and, more importantly, accurate description of what anal sex really is. I get tired of reading stories where the man just shoves his 12" dick into a woman's ass with no prep and no lube and the woman screams in ecstasy. She'd be screaming all right but it wouldn't be from enjoyment. Thanks for this beautiful touch of anal reality.