by erotica881988
I love the story and the imagery. Like Larry, I remember a time when I was young, inexperienced and lacking confidence, so I understand how he feels.
The story has a very realistic feel to it.
Great story telling, 5 stars. Loved the way Lawrence sniffed, licked, sucked and tongued Gia's brown hole. I hope he treats Gemma's ass in the same way if not better, after all she is the boss. Hope you post the next episode soon.
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Next chapter please!! Love the development of the story as well as the great sex!
OK, we're into 2020, and yet no chapter 11. You left far too much unfinished, and I, and probably most of your other followers would like to see either some closure, or additional adventures. Chapters 1-10 were excellently written from both style and content, and for an author of your ability, I would say this major work is unfinished, an deserves an appropriate ending.
what a twist. i expected something would happen. but the back story made so twistedly interesting. Larry and Gemma are meant to be together. Madison is hopelessly as a teacher not in anyway in love with Larry.
Happy writing. See what unfolds.