All Comments on 'And Then There Was Laurie'

Very original. Although the scene with the tarot card reader got a bit confusing.

Wife's a bitch? That's ok, just get two guys to rape her. That'll teach her. She'll probably end up liking it. And for the record, I have NEVER ONCE met a guy who would carry on fucking if the woman vomited on him. Not even a rapist.

Please, PLEASE put stuff like this in the rape / non-consensual category. Because it may be interracial, but this is not love in any shape or form.

i love it when xwives get it in the end

YES! TAKE THAT YOU HO!

You're an awful person for even thinking up such things. That's so degrading and berating to women its appauling. You should be absolutely ashamed of yourself for this.

But you have my attention. Will there be a final chapter to this? Does he get his wife pregnant by a black man? Does he get a good deal in the divorce or does she screw him to the wall? Did Cleo have a spell on HIM? So many questions.

I couldn't even finish the first chapter, this story sucked ass!

It will make the story more readable. It almost seemed like you spelt words wrong on purpose...desert instead of dessert....break instead of brake...winned instead of whine and so on. I gave it a 2.