All Comments on 'Andie's Alibi'

Yeah, I enjoyed it. Taking a summer job in a "pleasure palace" is a new twist!

It could be a porn movie mogul's place or sheesh god knows what. It's intriguing and well written enough to stay with. I enjoyed the wide-eyed suddenness of her virginity being taken. Much like in real life I'd expect.

The problem with this story is, the author crams too much into some paragraphs making it feel rushed and sometimes hard to follow. eg.

"Carry Andie's bags." Jordan told Simon. He nodded and picked up Andie's bags out of the car. "She's in the green room." Jordan looked at Andie.

This could have been over 4 paragraphs. This happens a few times. Spread it out and ensure everything is clear.

I gave it a 'five' on potential. It's a good read :-)

its a good story, but the first year model of mustangs was 64.5. dont believe me? look it up lol