All Comments on 'Andi's Dance Lessons'

by John Randolph

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CrkcpprCrkcppralmost 8 years ago
Arnolds turn ?

Maybe now the author will write a story where the husband gets to seduce young virgin college girls ????

No, couldn't have that now could we !

So damned hypocritical !

2*'s

impo_61impo_61almost 8 years ago
Now she will dance through divorce...

Now she will dance through divorce...1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
sorry impo, but no

Arnold is written as a complete WACC with no backbone at all.

The slut will continue to use him until she finds a better meal ticket.

She does not love or even respect him, so she has no long term planes with him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Arnold was not happy?

Well no shit Sherlock! His wife tells him she's a cheating slut and he's just "not happy"? And then you make Andi look to be the dumbest woman on the planet. What was sexy, interesting or entertaining about this mess? Nothing!

1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
5

to offset the asshole of LIT who reads everyone of these stories and then votes 1. Hope this helps your score or at least evens it out! WTF is wrong with you annony?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
If someone has to give you a #5 of off set another persons legitimate score

you should reconsider why you are writing. Score as you see it. This was a pathetic story and deserves a zero but I rated it a # 1 Fetish crap

chytownchytownalmost 8 years ago
I Would Say Stupid Story**

But someone beat me to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
1*

cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
1*

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oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 7 years ago
Next story needs to be bullets for Billy. Or maybe raping a rapist

While she obviously was wrong to let the twerp bust a Johnson on her,, he was the schemer and aggressor. Not counting sparring or goofing around I have not punched anyone since the 90s. I thought I was past that. Uh no. I know he is just a character but I want to beat down that little puton!

tennesseeredtennesseeredalmost 7 years ago
Wow!

This is high level erotica. The hoi polloi think this is cuck shit. Mores the pity.

Bravo, Author!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Stupid gets the divorce

and STD She deserves. Along with a single mother status.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
GAME PLAYING,,,REQUIRES A LOT OF RULES AND REGS

unless all are aware of them they don't count TK U MLJ LV NV

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