by Icetiger1227
You want us to believe a man that was capable of taking a dozen stores from the brink of failure to a huge success would just up and follow a strangers commands? You want us to believe a European food giant would move a man from the US to Europe knowing full well that there is a huge difference in how business is conducted in the two areas? You want us to believe that a man used to dealing with people of all types would NOT look this woman directly in the eyes? The rest of the story was just unimaginative drivel. Poorly conceived, badly done and so implausible that it was laughable. NO stars.
What a horrible way to end a great story! Did you just fall asleep at the keyboard or something? The premise is fantastic and the main character very likable. Please finish the story... correctly.