All Comments on 'Angel & Daddy's Story Ch. 01'

Still a bit confusing, but with promise. While a bit of mystery is indeed exciting, there seems a bit too much of it here. I do look forward to seeing what you do with this, how you take this 'intro' and truly develop it. Thanks for the tease in some ways a good tease can be good.

Thank you for the feedback and favorites!

@SplendidSpunk I appreciate your comments and yes, there are more chapters on the way.

I am open to suggestions for additional scenes for Angel and Daddy.

There are 9 chapters so far, at this moment 8 are pending approval.

I have purposely tried to keep the chapters brief enough to be a quick read and an interesting short story on their own, as well as part of the series.

Just found your story and read the first chapter. Looking forward to the next 8 (or however many there are). I prefer the longer chapters that follow each other up and build the excitement. So far, so good! :-)