by Daddysdirtygirl74
Just found your story and read the first chapter. Looking forward to the next 8 (or however many there are). I prefer the longer chapters that follow each other up and build the excitement. So far, so good! :-)
Thank you for the feedback and favorites!
@SplendidSpunk I appreciate your comments and yes, there are more chapters on the way.
I am open to suggestions for additional scenes for Angel and Daddy.
There are 9 chapters so far, at this moment 8 are pending approval.
I have purposely tried to keep the chapters brief enough to be a quick read and an interesting short story on their own, as well as part of the series.
Still a bit confusing, but with promise. While a bit of mystery is indeed exciting, there seems a bit too much of it here. I do look forward to seeing what you do with this, how you take this 'intro' and truly develop it. Thanks for the tease in some ways a good tease can be good.