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Angela5985Angela5985almost 9 years ago
awesome!!!!

Thank you JJ for taking my ideas and turning it into an amazing story! I truly had fun working on this story with you! You definitely have a lot of talent and imagination that bring so much depth to your stories. Thanks again JJ!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well done!

I can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
interesting and needs proofreading

Interesting story line. Please do a better job of proofreading, spell checking, grammar checking. Lack of polish will hurt good stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hot

Sure hope Jim gets more than a bj this time around

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 9 years ago
Good story...I'm hooked!

More please...SOON!

Storm113Storm113almost 9 years ago
uh uh

I'll say it before the marines hunt you down "the marines do not have corpsman"! They are Navy.

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