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All Comments on 'Angelina’s New Assistant Ch. 01'

by KenGore

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PTWaters1PTWaters1almost 9 years ago

Not bad for an early work. It reads as if this was a dream Nick was having since there was only a modicum of character and situational realism. Keep working on the word craft for sentence clarity and punctuation. :)

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