All Comments on 'Angels Ch. 06'

strange. I'm not quite sure what to think of all the archangels being so evil. Even the good ones are selfish and evasive and mean. I feel bad for Andariel. She's in the middle of a war and it seems she's the only one strong enough to fight. Hugely outnumbered but somehow surviving. You lose yourself, though, when you're forced to do ANYTHING in order to survive. I hope she can escape and live her own life. Or the Izual turns over a new leaf to be with her. For the record, tying her up and forcing her to accept his brother as well is just as bad as what her father did to her. Evil, repulsive and not at all sexy. As much as I want Izual to turn good and look after Andariel, I wish he could be damned even more than he is already. Really, I don't know which characters to like and which to hate. I usually like to choose a side but I'm willing to see where you're going with this. Looking forward to the next chapter.

The final chapter of Andariel's chapter is coming soon. I'm debating on whether I should write her sisters' stories. I love these guys and I'm just not ready to let them go yet.

you should write her sister's stories! I am loving this series!

Damn confusing. I swear there is something still missing. Why is she being used so badly? I read the 2 part story of her and Izual and it dose not tie in together. There is still no back story. I don't understand why your flow is not smooth but all over the place. I guess.!!

The two part story about Andariel and Izual doesn't tie in, because they have nothing to do with each other. I just liked the names because of something my exfiance told me. I'm working on the smoothness, which is why the next chapter of Duriel is so long in coming. I know I'm not a really good writer but I'm trying.