All Comments on 'Animal Instincts Ch. 01'

this is a great start to your story. I hope you keep writing, I can't wait to find out what happens. :)

Love the start, keep writing, More, more & more

Very good start. Keep this up I am hooked.

This a very good beginning. You r setting up the characters very nicely. I can't wait to read more. Mechmanas

If you are still have a worry feeling bout your writing, no need...up to ch 2 you are still good and i think, you are a good writer. If it is short but good in writing, i think the readers can accept it. Cant wait for the next postings.

I enjoyed this but I really think the chapters have to be longer. I would have liked to see the plot developed more. It was definitely too short. I would have liked to have seen James' character developed more in terms of who is he, how old, why can he read thoughts? I also hope to learn more about Skye. I found it strange that you wrote how Natalie had changed but not her, and was wondering if you were making her the main character. Anyhow, I think if you make the chapters longer and just develop the characters more soon, it'll be awesome. Can't wait to see more of the plot develop.

I'd like more background information on the main characters. I'm enjoying this! Looking forward to more.

Just make the chapters longer if you can. Your ending them on a good note keeping us interested. I like that you went on to her graduation from college that's a smart move very smart. Keep up the good work please post soon.

very nice first chapter, nice outlining of who is who and the hints that things aren't "normal".

i could say i want the chapters longer, maybe that will come when most introductions are made, but i'm loving to reads so far.

on to the next!

pretty good so far

PLEASE PLEASE CARRY THIS STORY ON