All Comments on 'Animalkind: Cobra'

Should have broken it up

love your story. hope you keep on writing

You needed an editor as you can clearly tell that English is not your first language. But the story was very good and I did read it all the way to the end. It would have been much better if you had broken it up into chapters too. If you write any more I'd definitely read them.

Great work on this, I really liked the slow transformations and how descriptive you were of it. I can't say much for the latter half or so, seeing as how the gender-bender was a real gtfo sign for me. I would've liked to know more of the content included beforehand, preferably before the story started. As I said before, it was great nonetheless, but I can't really convey the disappointment I felt when I got to that part.

You wrote well, and I enjoyed your story. Thank you very much for writing it. An editor would be helpful, yes however your plot and ideas are terrific. Thank you again.

Excellent Read, few grammatical and spelling errors. Very good considering English is not your first language.

One slight nitpick. The weights given for the characters lengths do not match up. A 40 foot long 10 in diameter (average) cylinder of meat would weigh around 1400 pounds. Or about 35 pounds / foot length.

Wonderful tale.

Once accustomed to your grammatical, no problems reading it.

I have just treated this as your style of writing.

Please keep writing.

Good read, due to the grammatical and word choice, it is a little slow to pick up, it after a few pages they become much led noticeable and the story flows better. All in all, I enjoyed this quite a bit

Great story. Details of the transformations and the plot were top.

Sadly, for my taste, the sex scenes come too short. If you had described those as graphical as the rest, it would have been bombastic.

i follow the plot and enjoyed very much. now where it ends , there are so many possibilities for more chapters with cobra family. that will be great if you think about it and write more chapters. you have the beta virus carriers and the scientist (not that mad one, but he also there in prison for more criminal activities :P), so we can have more evolution and new experiments. anyway you are going great and pls continue

that was wonderful! i imagine a future story where the now docile/peaceful chimera creates ways for people to modify themselves the way he had modified himself, or rather, herself now :3 being able to choose how they want to change or something

This story basically has everything I was looking for, except any fisting. Please write a sequel with the same characters, or one a few years later.

An editor is definitely needed for this story, but only for misspellings and incorrect word tenses. Other than that, the story is good.

[29.07.23]

OUTSTANDING!

The character and relationship development was Top Notch!

Just the right amount of descriptive sex for this type of tale.

The world building was well done.

Just the right amount of peril/conflict.

11/10 Cobra Eggs!!!!!