All Comments on 'Anna and the Vampire Ch. 04'

this is not the story you started with. i do not know why you gave us this let down but i know your original story was going to be so much better. hopefully when you deside to write again you will retain the joy and prose throughout.

This was udder rubbish and I'm sorry I read the other chapters.

Please, do NOT write again if you are going to trash your own stories so horridly.

Flesh out the characters, give us more backstory.

WTF....is this story written by a 5 y/o!? Fucking pathetic. Plz don't write any more you r worthless.. go be a whore instead...you'll get few bugs a night.

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Everyone is being a cunt in the comments. I think this is an okay story its just so short. The chapters should have been longer and what happens in each story could've been longer too. Constructive criticism. This story has a lot of potential, people need to stop being dicks and appreciate your time and effort. If they didnt like it then dont read it. Dont leave horrible comments but help the author on what you think would've made the story better