All Comments on 'Anna vs. Sarah'

... rather than a complete story. It had its moments, but it came from nowhere all of a sudden and disappeared almost as quickly.

You should re-write the whole thing and re-submit it.

Three stars.

This would have been perfect for jello wrestling!

"Sarah had perky and saggy breasts"

Do you know what these words mean?

...but not perfect either. It was hard to hold my breath of excitement, yes, but the story is otherwise kind of too short. More details, about the crowd, if there was any, or anything would improve it. 2 *.

No woman has a brown clitoris... Do some research.