All Comments on 'Annabelle Ch. 01'

Beautiful start. Please continue. Thanks

Please continue the story

Longer next time please! Want to read more.

But if you don't have an editor find one. There were some minor spelling errors that distracted me like through and straight. I don't know if you just wanted to shorten it or what, but it would make it better to write the whole word. At least for me, however I'm just picky.

I cant wait for the next chapter, love the story!!!!

Please.

thanks for all the wonderfull comments, this was my first attempt in writing of any kind so i appreciate all the feedback. I am taking your advise and looking for an editor for upcoming chapters.

this was a great beginning and it needs more update sooon please

Cannot wait for the next chapters!

Nicely done!!!

a really good start, I can't wait for more, libby

very good start - can't wait to see how the Story between the two unfolds.

Keep up the good work! thank you for sharing

this is my favorite story of all time

got me hooked already

The grammar mistakes made this hard to read.

Grammar aside, this is what I would expect for the start of a relationship. Nothing to report so far.