All Comments on 'Annabelle Ch. 01'

Grammar aside, this is what I would expect for the start of a relationship. Nothing to report so far.

The grammar mistakes made this hard to read.

got me hooked already

this is my favorite story of all time

very good start - can't wait to see how the Story between the two unfolds.

Keep up the good work! thank you for sharing

a really good start, I can't wait for more, libby

Cannot wait for the next chapters!

Nicely done!!!

this was a great beginning and it needs more update sooon please

thanks for all the wonderfull comments, this was my first attempt in writing of any kind so i appreciate all the feedback. I am taking your advise and looking for an editor for upcoming chapters.

Please.

I cant wait for the next chapter, love the story!!!!

But if you don't have an editor find one. There were some minor spelling errors that distracted me like through and straight. I don't know if you just wanted to shorten it or what, but it would make it better to write the whole word. At least for me, however I'm just picky.

Longer next time please! Want to read more.

Please continue the story

Beautiful start. Please continue. Thanks