All Comments on 'Anne's New Job'

i liked this story but I am sure there can be more to it...

Slavery isn’t BDSM unless it’s consensual, but this story has great potential.

wonderful beginning!

You've set an excellent scene, and your writing is good. I wonder about the era and location of the piece. It seems pre-current era, except the thong would be out of place then, and would be fine today. Small details, hardly worth mentioning.

I'd love to find out what happened next.

Although there are clear BDSM elements to the story, there would have to have Some form of consent, which is lacking in this story. That means it belongs in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category, at least until Mistress & Master persuade her to see the benefits of consensual submission.

Either way, your story is worth another chapter (at least). Even if you never finish the series, I hope you keep writing.