All Comments on 'Annette'

Great debut story - well done indeed

Turns out even good girls and boys want that special connection - I'm happy with the idea that fucking could be a gift from 'God'..

Lovely premise.

Good story.

Needed more 'wonderment' from Annette,

Sex moved ahead much too fast once it started.

Needed more ervousness from Annette that had to be overcome before zooming ahead.

Needed her needing to to be told how best to play with his cock and balls.

Rtc.

Four stars. Could have been five.

Well done!

Such a great story. Well done :D

Nice. Thanks for being so honest.

Just like Real Life!

Interesting concept, liked it

Very much liked the story line. A good Christian girl learns that sex is a gift from God.

An excellent maiden effort. Keep writing.

Wonderful. Makes me remember my time at a conservative Christian college!

Great story with fantastic descriptions of the physical sensations involved with first time sex. More please!

It is a well-written story with a believable plot. The bedroom apartment was an excellent environment for a sexually repressed virgin, who was unintentionally searching for her sexual self. Her internal dialogue and constant worry about being a Christian raised barriers to her behavior that were subtly overcome. Jason the good, safe, Christian was in a position to engage Anette in the soft foreplay that brought her to the stage where she could accept her surrender to the raging hormones that fill every male and female that age have. His slow soft approach to their mating was believable and well-done. It is an excellent story well-told

Bit tedious- sorry

Loved it! The thread that runs through the story is Christian guilt. However, the message from Christian parents is not only that you should not have sex, but that if you transgress you may be ruined by getting pregnant. Even non-conservative girls are fearful of this outcome. Annette isn't stupid - she must know the possible consequences of what she is doing. This whole aspect of her first time is however missing from the story. I expected that at the least Jason would relieve her anxiety by pulling out before orgasm, but he goes ahead and places his partner in a frankly dangerous situation.

Excellent sorry, very well told.

Annette 🔥🔥

Beautifully and very tenderly written. Lots of memories came boiling out. The fear, denial, and guilt used for parental control, instead of honesty, knowledge, and wisdom, can have catastrophic impact when reality finally emerges from the artificial shadows.

The biology is inescapable, but some understanding of the physical and emotional transformations makes it easier to rejoice in the transcendence without fear.

Very good writing, very descriptive. I doubt a religious, untouched virgin who had never even really been kissed would give enthusiastic head right away, but other than that I liked it.

Wow. Thank you for this excellent first-time contribution here (although I doubt it's the first time you've shared your writing anywhere). It really is well written, well-paced, with great internal monologue and -- I have to admit -- a good job of capturing that young evangelical mindset. Mine didn't survive college either, thank God. I was surprised that the thought of pregnancy risk never ran through Annette's mind, no matter how abrupt her "decision" to be rid of her virginity was. Maybe that will dawn on her tomorrow morning in chapter two? Whatever you write next, I'm looking forward to it.

Spectacular. Please never stop writing.