All Comments on 'Annie Fucking Oakley'

please continue

No real end. 4 stars. Damn but I wish all the writers here would end their stories properly.

Bill S.

LOL, well Annie Oakley had a "blast."

Really do need an ending on this one, good story up to there...............

Please continue, the hoe hasn't got her box filled with rock salt yet. Pistol whip the slut bitch!!

Even a blind man could see that one coming, but it was still fucking awesome. Just sorry that it ended when it did.

Yeah, this was a fun little sketch. We all knew how this would end up, if not how it would play out. I'd liked to have seen the story a bit more fleshed out. On the other hand, sometimes a snack is fine, you don't need a full meal.

That was a good story and the ending was perfect. Laughed my butt off.

Good story, but somewhat too short and desperately needed a follow up with a HEA. Cheers Ppfzz

Made me laugh, nice come back, nicely done

I am still smiling. Why would anyone cheat on a person who had lots of guns and a great shot? Idiot!

;-) Good one!

Couldn't agree more with a previous comment. Great story. Hilarious at times and why would anyone cheat on a woman who has guns is a great shot and has anger issues. Guess there is really no such thing as a cure for stupid lol 😆 BardnotBard

Now that was hilarious, great story. Thanks for writing.

This time you got me laughing at the end.

Punchy and fun! Loved it.

Where the finish. I hate it when there is a good story line and bam just drops.4 forethought 1 for finish

;-) Thanks for a really fun read!!

Hilarious, entertaining, well-written. A fun read, Thanks.

Ed

You could come back to this and really flesh it out in the style you are good at. Four for me only because a lot of your other stuff had more depth. Enjoyed it though.

Just right not to much on point *****!

Great story. PMS is an evil bitch.