All Comments on 'Anniversary Ch. 01'

Short, sweet, and sensitive.

Loved the romance! You describe the scene so well.

a better endind

....and then she farted.

But as a story not very interesting or entertaining. Just not enough information.

You are not talking to me so change tense. The stories are impossible to read when written in this tense.

It's nice to read about happily married couples that still love and enjoy each other in bed and don't feel the need for her to fuck others to make each other satisfied

Unfinished though it be, under 4, really? Not cuck enough for you? No angst, trauma, infidelity? Pray tell what foul soul finds strong defect in marital suave?

Not nasty enough for some readers, but I like it.