All Comments on 'Anniversary Ch. 01'

Not nasty enough for some readers, but I like it.

Unfinished though it be, under 4, really? Not cuck enough for you? No angst, trauma, infidelity? Pray tell what foul soul finds strong defect in marital suave?

It's nice to read about happily married couples that still love and enjoy each other in bed and don't feel the need for her to fuck others to make each other satisfied

You are not talking to me so change tense. The stories are impossible to read when written in this tense.

But as a story not very interesting or entertaining. Just not enough information.

a better endind

....and then she farted.

Loved the romance! You describe the scene so well.

Short, sweet, and sensitive.