All Comments on 'Anniversary in Vegas'

The description of all those body fluids turned me off, yuck.

Amanda needs to join them !!

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Many of us wish our wives were that outgoing. The body fluids bit is all part of the real world. Keep the stories going.

I liked the story myself. Would have loved it better if Amanda had joined in, but you now have a followup story if you are so inclined. The story was well written and pretty much free of spelling & other editing errors. Pretty good for a first effort! Keep up the good work. I'll look forward to your next offering. I'm not sure why readers are so inclined to trash new writers, but don't take it to heart!! Tom in Vegas Baby!!

....and smells, and all that other yucky stuff that makes up sex on the physical plane of existence. That's why I'm always wondering, how come I spend so much time on those yucky sex lit sites, forced to think about all the yucky things that happen with sex.YuckYuckYuck!!!-Good story by the way, realistic, (so it works.) THAT'S what makes a great fantasy. The FANTASY is simply GETTING SOMETHING RARE. (People DO win the lottery)-it works when it is something possible to get in the first place.

Whatever it takes to get her up to running.