All Comments on 'Another Nice Arrangement'

The story seems mostly fine if a little on the tell side of show don't tell.

But I'm still trying to figure out why he is getting texts on his computer. Maybe emails although texts do make more sense from an ex. I'm sure you can get your texts on your computer, but people don't and this guy supposedly makes Paypal payments on his phone, but gets his texts on his computer. How perverse.

Nice story. I've been through similar myself and I know exactly how Jeff feels. You've perfectly described a finsub being taken into sub space and rinsed. In this type of relationship no one loses, do they? Jeff gets what he wants and so does his ex. I wish there were more stories like these, thanks for posting it.

Love this!!