All Comments on 'Aphora's Mission Ch. 01'

by ValoryG

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So far so good

That was a good opening. A little background and a lot of unresolved questions.

tex4tgtex4tgover 7 years ago
Not to bad :)

keep it up . If you will write it ill read it .

jezchazaniajezchazaniaover 7 years ago
Enjoying this story

Thanks great stuff

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