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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Horrible.

grabmyballsgrabmyballsover 8 years ago
Actually, Wonderful.

I loved how your imagination put this goddess in our modern world. Accept the premise, and the story just hangs together. And then the final line made me laugh out loud. You may have had an extended joke in mind, but it is very stylish.

Seyazou-NubilleSeyazou-Nubilleover 8 years ago
I love it

Unique story - and it's VERY rare that I leave a comment. Looking forward to more.

erectus123erectus123over 8 years ago
very creative

effort

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