by Jeff818
Great story
Nice job with scene setting and character development.
p.s. I love the smell of honeysuckle. LOL
i really liked that. life in the wild and sex in the wild. that was extremely great description and amazing characters.
Cute as a passle o' baby possums! Giggle! This is an engaging story of "mountain love", well-written and charming.
THIS IS A REAL CUTE STORY,,,THIS IS A CLASSIC LOVE STORY!
A nice plot, different. Great descriptions of Lillie and Billy, the environment, the weather, the scents, the sounds, the sights, and the sex. A good example of showing and not telling.