All Comments on 'Appalachian Love'

A nice plot, different. Great descriptions of Lillie and Billy, the environment, the weather, the scents, the sounds, the sights, and the sex. A good example of showing and not telling.

THIS IS A REAL CUTE STORY,,,THIS IS A CLASSIC LOVE STORY!

Cute as a passle o' baby possums! Giggle! This is an engaging story of "mountain love", well-written and charming.

i really liked that. life in the wild and sex in the wild. that was extremely great description and amazing characters.

Great story

Nice job with scene setting and character development.

p.s. I love the smell of honeysuckle. LOL