All Comments on 'Arabian Nights Ch. 01'

Awful short for a chapter. Maybe action happened a bit too quickly?

Also.... review your writing before publishing or get an editor. "test" of the night...

"he spoke as he walked past me, extended hand and his flitted his fingers across the bulge in my panties hidden under my black dress"

Really? his flitted his fingers?

;-)

What fun.

Mmmm

Debs

How I long to meet a girl like that

brilliant , well done , when is the next chapter coming ,soon i hope

I want to wear burqa by force and suck cock and fucked to loose my virginity with muslim man age 45+ or a widow..... please make me burqa crossdresser mail me singh7732@gmail.com

I hope the protagonist wakes up in a burqa...