by Ragnarok385
Thanks for the heads up on the "them" part, that's where having someone else edit your work would be very helpful :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I found it much more engaging to have these stories be about more than just sex, but instead focus on what is happening to everyone involved and their reactions. I try to make sure that the situation and the response by all the people is somewhat realistic, and hope I captured that well enough in all my works this one included.
I like how it's more based on the transformations than the sex.
One thing though, you refer to the die as "them" a lot. Should be singular.
I actually built a game board, cards, random number generator, and character tracker for every one of these games. I suppose I could try and upload them here if that's something people would enjoy. But glad you liked the story these are always fun to write.
I'm glad you were able to keep track of who had what parts at what size because I couldn't, but it was hot as hell no matter what!