All Comments on 'Arrival'

But you should watch your paragraphs don't become such solid, impenetrable blocks of words; it is off-putting and your story deserves better presentation - it is really good.

Thank you, more please and four stars - it would have been five if it had been formatted better.

Awesomely hot. The not knowing who is a little squicky to me, but I understand it is the foundation of the scene.

I'm good with your formatting. Longer paragraphs are fine. In fact, I prefer that to a lot of two sentence paragraphs. I also hate grocery bags with only one or two items in them.....just sayin'......