by Paul_Clowell
I very much liked your original "Art in Reality", hence I certainly appreciate this story to continue :-)
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But I think chocolate ice cream would be normal eating it from your bowels.
Great story but just seems unfinished. Definitely needs another chapter.
A charming story beautifully crafted. More please - but no more "gotten"s!
I have to agree with the previous comment, there's plenty of space and unknowns for you to drum up a sequel. (A jealous boyfriend? His 'disturbed' ex- girlfriend? etc. etc.)
By the way - did he ever get his car out of the ditch?
Well done - more please
VBR
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Literotica, being the Land of Fantasy, is the perfect home for an extraordinarily unlikely coincidental story like this. There are a number of avenues for this to proceed, but we can all hope that there will be additional chapters. I usually feel that a story that has such a good is best left to the reader to fantasize the continuance and the ending, but I would like to see what the author can do with this. There are many mysteries still to be uncovered, not the least of which is the fact that we have a very attractive woman all alone, sexually active (the contraceptive injection), having lots of free time and open to a relationship with an older man (we don't know how much older). I can work out additional plot lines myself, but I'd like to see how Clowell handles it. It's a tough act to follow. 5*
What a treat to find a good story line written in a literary way. It's great to find someone who understands the importance of good grammar in holding the reader's attention. Too many efforts on Literotica.com are anything but literary.
What a promising start. Two lovely characters and an idyllic Cornish backdrop.