- Mind Control
- Artemis
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When she saw this she got up and squatted over me. The momentary relief as the urge to cum faded lasted only a few seconds before she plunged her pussy over my cock. I frankly have no idea how I didn't cum immediately. Perhaps she was using more magic, I was too distracted to notice. My breath caught as I adjusted to the feel of her hot, wet sheath around my cock.
Somehow she found that perfect rhythm again that kept me with the feeling that climax was imminent without ever reaching it. I was still forced to stare into her eyes as she rode me. Well defined muscles grasped at my cock as she drove her hips up and down. Her expression was now one of extreme satisfaction. My muscles cramped and I felt like my spine was going to be torn out. Finally I couldn't take any more.
"Let me cum," I said.
"Surely you don't want to become my slave," she pouted at me.
"Just let me cum you bitch!"
"That's no way to talk to someone you want to do something so nice for you," she said, slowing her gyrations right down and rotating her hips.
"Please let me cum Artemis."
"Still not good enough," she said.
I let out a guttural howl of anguish as she rose up so that my cock nearly fell out of her but kept the tip nestled inside her to tease me.
"Make me your slave!"
"All you had to do was ask."
She began slamming her hips up and down but remained in complete control of the timing of my orgasm. "This is the moment you remember all your life, the moment you lost to a savage. Enjoy it"
She lowered herself one last time, her firm ass cheeks grinding into my pelvis. Those greedy internal muscles clutched at me powerfully and I finally climaxed. My eyes closed despite her command and great spasmodic contractions wracked me as the cum rocketed out in great spurts. She ground her hips against me as I finished cumming. As my eyes opened I felt her presence in my mind and knew she had won.
- COMMENTS
Femdomlover01over 1 year agoI won't spend a lot of time writing here because Perentie, above, said it so much better than I can. I agree with pretty much everything Perentie said until the last half of the last sentence: "its a sore point to an otherwise good story." No, for me anyway, it ruins the story. As Perentie said: " he had been nothing but kind and supportive of her so why have her act like he'd been some cruel master?" Hell, he even asks her to be his deputy and to help with reforms. Even if you try to make the argument that his reforms weren't enough and she was willing to do anything to help her people, and even if she felt like enslaving him was the only way to achieve her ends, still she could gave shown him some compassion, some caring. She could have been a kind mistress and, as long as he obeys her, she could have made his life serving her to be very sweet. Instead, his life is going to be a living hell. It just makes her a a cruel, hateful, evil bitch. It's no wonder his people found it necessary to subjugate her people. Look how one of them behaves when she gets the chance. Looks like they really are savages. God help his people if hers ever get loose. I guess some people like writing, and some people like reading, stories about cruel, hateful, evil bitches who destroy good men for no good reason, but I don't. I have to see enough of that in real life.
DreaMajorabout 6 years agoMeh. I simply don’t feel evil is arousing. Scary, perhaps, but not sexual; and it doesn’t matter whether the baddie is male or female.
mimicv18over 14 years agothe storys great but i have read all your works and they all have the same problem. you dont draw out dom or sex enough put a lot more description of the torture and the act of sex. go in to every little detail of whats happening and then add more you can never have enough detail in this sort of story you should be able to draw this sort of story to a huge lengh.
Perentiealmost 15 years agoIt just seemed a bit odd to me that Artemis could hold such bitterness toward her teacher after everything he had done for her. Based on what you wrote he had been nothing but kind and supportive of her so why have her act like he'd been some cruel master? So he found her people's magic crude, prove him wrong and its clear he'd accept that and apologize. I can see her wanting to improve her people's position but don't see the need to make him a complete slave and talk about enjoying mistreating him. Rather I would think she'd enjoy forcing him to acknowledge she was better in some ways than him and out of fondness liking that she had some control over him. Basically her character doesn't make any sense to me, its a sore point to an otherwise good story.
