All Comments on 'As Close As You Can Get'

You are obviously very young and ignorant, the writer's terminology is correct and not the juvenile bullshit which you are suggesting is correct.

Absolutely have to feed all the hunger you've brought out with this one

Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter

The story was nearly wrecked when the author used "coming" rather than the proper slang of "cumming" for an orgasm, also likely used "come" when it should have been "cum" for semen/orgasm/etc. which indicates an author lacking in knowledge of his topic.

Excellent debut story

I enjoyed this story. Very hot. Hope you deliver a part 2. I would love to see what happens next.