All Comments on 'Ashley's Revenge Ch. 05'

by TallMarriedMan

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dfw713dfw713over 10 years ago
Keep this story growing....

I have enjoyed every chapter so far...looking forward to many more and many new adventures.

Nebel815Nebel815over 10 years ago
Very good

Keeps getting better

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
how long before the wife catches them?

Soon I hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well written

Very nice I can easilly read a few more chapters, Thank You

qwikguyqwikguyover 10 years ago
Great Story

The writing is great and I am drawn into the story as if I was there and in his place....alas...fantasy. Keep up the great work and this story still has more miles to go. Please don't stop yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
well written

I'm loving this series of stories... keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Waiting for chapter 6

and 7 and 8 . . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Caught!!!!!

The wife has to catch them, and get drawn into a threesome

TallMarriedManTallMarriedManover 10 years agoAuthor
There Will Be More!

I'm not sure if the wife will catch them and get into a 3-way, but there are more chapters coming. Work and the holidays have limited my writing time but I'm hoping to get chapter 6 out in the next couple of weeks and hopefully more soon thereafter!

Thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love the way you tell a story..

I can only guess what's going to happen next, but I hope Ashley helps to catch his wife cheating. She seems to be gone quit a bit.. Thanks TMM Can't wait for the next chapter..

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
Fox is Mainstream?

I thought Mainstream was their antithesis! As in Lame Street Media!

your true colors are showing (red) lol

mdngtman7mdngtman7almost 10 years ago
everyman's dream, damn i love it lol

If only huh lol, in europe and around the world this would be the norm rather than the exception. This country is so backwards with all its godheads, and religious bigots its amazing we get to have a sight like this to read. Fantasy is contagious, im enjoying your sexcapde with ashly. This is a very nice story, mmm so yeah, if only this was on audio and ashley's voice was telling the story lol lol...would be hot. Im suspecting brian's wife has a fuck buddy or two is why she is sex shy. Either way im enjoying this story...bring it on..more more more lol.

dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
No Matter

No matter where you take this story, it will be great!!

I wanna fuck his wife, cuz she ain't had none since last week. She has potential to be a good fuck. Ok she has some onna side rite??

BiotechGirlBiotechGirlover 8 years ago
Another spicy line...

"Mr. Jones, may I slide my tight little pussy down on your big, hard cock now?"

Hot little story that you have written. Thank you for sharing.

maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
Ok I just started breathing again.

"Oh show me the way to the next whiskey bar, Man must have whiskey or he will die".

You have a fan club, biotechgirl, still need a intern ?

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
That Was HOT****

This is one hot series. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Five hot chapters so far. I do appreciate a moist/wet pussy. But there does seem to be a hair fetish in this story.

Mike the Irishman 🍀

oldtwitoldtwit12 months ago

You still have a lot of work going on

stockingnutstockingnut12 months ago

So hot! I can picture her long sexy legs.

wwaldripwwaldrip11 months ago

Very hot way to start the work day

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