All Comments on 'Assistance Appreciated'

While your English isn't perfect, I didn't really detract from the story, which was pretty good and fairly true in my experiance.

Disappointing! I expected better from you. This crap is not worthy of your talent. It is so bad that I did not read it all.

Winterfrog, normally your one author (amoung a select few) that when I see a new story by you I immediately stop and read it. But somehow this was one of the stories felt I should have passed up on reading. I mean it was about two guys helping a wife humiliate a husband and how all of them got away with it.

I mean you have two guys that think gangbanging a wife is the way to go because she's difficult. Then you throw in the fact that they had sex with her the night before, after she delibrately got her husband drunk, so the two guys could have sex with her, and none of the three felt guilty while they were chumming it up with the husband the next day. And to throw in a different twist, the both took turns sneaking in some sex the next day while each of the guys took the husband off on a walk so the other could have sex with the wife. These three cuckolded the husband, and each year he sends them christmas cards to thank them for it!! Huh???

Nope sorry, can't say that I like this story. Normally I love them, but this one isn't up to your usually fantastic flair. It more of a humiliated husband theme, even if the husband didn't know he was, the reader knows.

Sorry, but this wasn't as good as your normal stuff.

-Risq

I agree with Risq 001, not one of your better stories and not up to the standards you have normally set. I've enjoyed most of yours, not this one!

Rape 'em if they can't take a joke! Good story.

Regardless of what some may think of the content Winter; you still wrote it well. We as authors cannot please them all. We all have our own preferences and that is what makes the world go around......angel.

I was shocked and depressed to see your name associated with this shitty story.

This is the last thing we expect from you. This definitly is your worst writing ever.

We all expect sensible/consiquencial...stories from you and so far I have read and loved every story you have written (exept this).

If you belive (as you have potrayed in this story) that cuckolding a man , engaging group/gangbang with the wife... makes the marrige better and makes her a loving/devoted wife for the rest of life..... then that makes all the stories you have written so far.. Redundent and deminishes your reputetion as one of the rare sensible writers.

Each week this website publishes hundreds of sick cuckolding/slutwife stories... a dozen new sickfuck writer is born every week...

But a writer with your telent/sense of morality/sense of consiquence/sense of retribution against a wrong , is born once in a long blue moon... And we have to wait for months to get a story written by them.

This is why it is perticulerly depressing to see a good writer like you come up with a story like this... do not dissapoint your fans ( like me ) with stories like this in the future.

Plese leave this kind of story matirial to be written by jaded sickos out there... And go back to the style of writing that has been so successfull in the past and we all come to love.

I am more than sure YOU will be back with a Bang...next time

<< Mahmood >>

or 'rightness'.

This one was completely amoral and the worse for it.

You seem to have lost yourself this time.

What the hell happened to you. Against my better judgement, I gave you a "2" because of past performance

who you are, but I would like to ask you to spot using winterfrog's name to release the shit you write. Please, let winterfrog come back to us...

Like some others I felt this wasn't a good one. Please keep writing as I have always looked for your stories. Thank you for your time.

...and exactly how small is your penis?

I think Winterfrog is trying to write something different from his normal type of story. As a writer, he wanted to venture into different territories. Maybe that's why there no "the end" to this story. All & all I think it's a nicely written story. --- Thor

Yes, thank you for seducing and fucking my slut of a wife. Our marriage is so much better now that I know what a fucking whore she is. I decided that since she opened up the marriage then I can fuck all those young students that come through the school. My life has never been better and I've never had more pussy in my life. Of course I don't do my soon to be ex wife any more as she makes me sick, but i'm getting plenty so who needs the dumb cunt?

Half the time it does not make any sense, almost dislexic.

It really sound like a rambling of an idiot. Unreadable !!!

for to turn her over and to turn her around. Duh! TK U MLJ LV NV

Not very good. Must be one of your earlier tales. Oh well.

sometimes they carry-over Av-Ova, TK U MLJ LV NV

&quot;betrayedbylove&quot;

Another good story. This one had me thinking, that I wish, I was ether of the men in the room with the other two.

how you handle them is your bag. TK U MLJ LV NV

Pathetic, sad story.

The German colloquial 'Besserwisser' (lit. better knower) finds its English equal in a 'know it all.'

That didn't make much sense, even for Frog.

I agree with 26thNC

Bull shit.

You can do better.

Looking at some of the other comments posted I was relieved to discover that I'm not the only reader who struggled to make any sense of this offering. Most definitely NOT Winterfrog's finest hour. 2 stars.

Your normal story telling capabilities

It's difficult to see how fucking another man's wife is going to improve their marriage but that seems to be something of an obsession here in LW. I guess it's the ultimate ego boosting fantasy to seduce a woman who seems to be unattainable and reduce her to the level of a crack whore. Strange.

JR