by fastandsloppy
Well done my man. Another perfectly written piece of erotica that had me in from the start. Looking forward, as always, to reading more.
good descriptive intro. And leaves a trailer for the possibility of more about Athena
HP
As Eric pointed out in his comment, this story is a piece of a larger whole. Originally it was the first chapter of a novella I've been working on but I never really felt the whole thing hung together as a large story. However, I like some chapters quite a bit so I will be dropping more Athena tales from time to time as I rework them as stand alone short stories.
STAY TUNED!
Comparing it to the draft you sent me, it's even better. It's been improved so well, and a few changes I see.
Look forward to all the rest of this epic to come.
Once again, congrats.
GK
Eric_Shift