All Comments on 'Attacked Ch. 01'

Oh my god i cant believe you would do this to me such an amazing story started and going then nothing please hurry and wright a second part to this story

Don't leave us in suspense. Very good beginning.

I hope you do follow this up with more than just a chapter 2. You have the beginnings of what could be a series. I already have questions. Like who attacked Angel? Was it this god like man standing in front of her?how will she react to the sudden changes her life is about to take? See it will need more than one more chapter in the least.

So get writing, see what you get for being a newer author to Lit, demanding fans. Thanks for sharing this story.

I already have chapter's 2-4 done :) I am working on Chapter 5 now.

it was a good start to the story interested in what is going to come next

Oh, that was just diabolical. Hurry and submit the other chapters!

love the beginning...very nice start. look forward to more

Good start.