by dan_kildall
This was on reddit a few days ago. I hope you get permission or you are the original author.
don't listen to the others iT was real good like to see them two get together maybe mom finds out-BG
Regarding this being previously posted on Reddit, yes, that was me as well.
Since the chapters have become consistently longer, I thought I would publish them to Literotica as well for its members to read.
More chapters are being posted as soon as I can.
Great start! I can't wait to read the sequel. Just add a few more details about what everyone's wearing.
You took a very good picture of this young man and his aunt enjoying the party. Can't wait to read more.
Hey, I finally got a chance to read this. Freud would have a field day with the whole mother/sister connection in your story ;-)
Then again, I think Freud was a total fraud and a sick fuck that needed to justify his own fetishes by making everyone else out to be as sick as him. :)
Anyway, hi! :)
First: Not 'into' the whole 'fuck your family' thing, but having said that I've read a few chapters now and am starting to see the appeal. Isn't that the definition of a good story? Something that makes you question your assumptions? I think so.
I like how you have made this boy real, even though you didn't go the character sketch route. And the dancing scene was well done. I could feel his nervous tension.
This gets exponentially hotter as the chapters progress so anyone thinking this is too tame is in for a surprise.
Thanks!
Ditto the Vanessa chick, BYW.
asianToy
This story is off to a very good start. It has an excellent pace and is realistic. I've suggested to my wife and her sister that I buy them both some undies they could model for me and see where that went...just an idea you might wish to draw from.
I like slow, logical build-ups in a story. I enjoy the mental games the characters play. Good start.
Hot had me getting out of my underwear and stroking to it as I was reading it I got my nut off Cumming with him to down her throat was awesome bj...ty please more